EMMA GOLD – HARD
– 2001
The author made a mistake. She
decided her character was herself, hence that the story was autobiographical.
That explains the constant shift from the past to the present which can be done
since as the author she is at a distance and as the character she is inside,
existentially present.
But there is another consequence.
I will take one instance page 265-266:
“Now, you’re reading this and
doing one of two things: (1) relating to everything I say, in which case I
extend my sympathy as you are obviously also suffering from anything from low
to medium level depression. You can comfort yourself that you are not severely
depressed as, if you were, you would not have the concentration to sit and read
this novel. Or, more likely, since apparently only 10 per cent of the
population is depressed at one time, (2) you are thinking that I am a depressed
misery guts, in which case you will fall into one of two further categories:
(i) you’ve been depressed before but because you are happy now you are unable
to relate to how I am feeling. It’s like childbirth, where you soon forget the
pain of giving birth so completely that you are unable to recall it, or (ii)
you’ve never been depressed.”
She can only imagine what the
reader is imagining when and if she speaks as the author. She then sounds
extremely arrogant trying to analyze the reader’s consciousness and she is missing
the most important stance: that of a reader that feels empathy not for the
author he does not care for but for the character because that reader may know
from experience what it is to be depressed and may even consider the
character’s depression is not as severe as the author pretends and as it could
have been because that reader has gone one step farther at least and found
himself institutionalized.
It is a shame because the story
has some very interesting elements.
The sexual harassment case is
very fascinating. It concerns women here and in spite of the rather free sexual
innuendo going on constantly among office workers (or plain blue collar workers
too), it is banned from an employer to an employee. We can wonder why it cannot
go down the ladder of management but it is a fact that such language, what’s
more gestures are banned from employer or manager to employee. Note here we are
only dealing with a male employer and a female employee. The reverse situation
is not even hinted at, not to speak of gay or lesbian situations. That’s a
shame in a way since there is a gay character who is quite active and important
though he is pathetic. The novel seems to imply that kind of segregation or
harassment is only from male employer to female employee.
The second interest of this novel
is the exploration of the relation among members of broken families. In fact
there seems to be nearly only broken families. Divorces, separations, breakups
and other forms of splitting partnerships apart are explored in all possible
ways. The crucial one is of course that of the divorced mother, Tina, and her
two sons Luca and Mario. The relation is so possessive on the mother’s side and
so submissive on the sons’ side that the end is nearly surprising if not close
to impossible.
The point of view is so feminine
that the subtleties of male characters and their psychology are not explored.
Even, the gay character is not explored in any real nuances or detail. The main
idea is that it is always a question of domination or control, and apart from
that nothing but sexual intercourse, as kinky as possible. And failure is
always attributed to domination and control from one partner. In fact the only
couple that actually gets to some epiphany gets there with such a change in the
minds of the two people that it is hardly imaginable. Miracles exist, but in
love I doubt it very much.
The novel is well written in journalistic
style more than any literary elaboration. It makes it entertaining and easy to
read though not more fascinating than sunset over a vast flat plain entirely
sown with blond wheat hardly ten days after sowing. From time to time in the following
weeks a red poppy may grow on the outskirts and edges of the field.
Dr Jacques COULARDEAU
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